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I want to remember you like this...
          (Just like this.)

I'm through with
                    first glances and
                    second chances


      Thanks for just abandoning me,
                And all your friends...
   It's ok.
     Don't worry about me.
       I'm fine.

You'd cut off all your fingers just for an excuse not to call me.

I've already made my mistakes.
  You're my favourite.
    Best one I've made yet.
You're cute as hell, and you suckered me right in. sweet. heart.

Taking turns at 40 miles an hour in your two door.
     I hope you crash,
            And they never find your body in that ditch...

   I'll remember you just like this...
             On your knees,
                            defenseless.
       30 more minutes...
              then you're mine.

    Sorry to disappoint you,
                      (darling.)
                But I might be coming home in the ambulance tonight.

       Don't look so sad when you see my face.


          You'll remember me like this...
                       (Just like this.)
©2005-2009 ~xparis-in-flames
:iconxparis-in-flames:

Author's Comments

More Than This.


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Pretty sure this is kinda lame. Just goes to show that I can't write, but I attempted, so here it is.

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:iconyournotagoodbye:
you can to write! really good.:+fav:!!

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i smile to direct his attention from the rest of this sinking ship.
:iconlove-is-vengeance:
Very well written you can feel the emotions behind this!

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And until i decide to take my watch off i will still believe that we were just a matter of time
:iconxparis-in-flames:
aww thanks :) for the comment and the favourite.

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.brace.yourself.for.impact.
:iconxparis-in-flames:
heck yes... i wrote it about like three different people.

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.brace.yourself.for.impact.
:iconsubduedpromises:
You're cute as hell, and you suckered me right in. sweet. heart.

Taking turns at 40 miles an hour in your two door.
Well, I hope you crash,
And they never find your body in that ditch...
I'll remember you just like this...
On your knees,defenseless.30 more minutes...then you're mine.

my favorite part.

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:halfliquid: from a girl inside a ghost town
:iconxparis-in-flames:
:D thanks

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.brace.yourself.for.impact.
:iconblue-cherokee:
Omg this is incredible Paris, how can you say you cant write? :hug: :clap: I love this. Its sad too though
:iconpencilscraps:
I love it, it's beautiful.

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and true love waits in haunted attics
and true love lives on lollipops and crisps
:iconhopelesslynumb:
amazing. definitely a fav and i am going to pu tyou on my dev watch. kk??

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you don't have squirrely wrath
you don't have a fluffy tail
you don't have...nuts...

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